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    He wasn't a man of many words. The few he cared to ply in were often coarse and vulgar, and of little greater consequence. So the task before him was deceptively daunting. Three letters. Three different things to say. Not many words to each, and the few he'd scratched were sloppily handwritten and no-doubt had spelling mistakes. But there was a certain romance to that, or at least he hoped. While HoloNet made it trivial to send a message from Coruscant to Munto Codru in the blink of an eye, it was cavalier and effortless. And maybe face to face, these important words would come out wrong when he needed them to be said just right.

    "Bring me anudder bottle."

    Ledo growled, glassy-eyed from his barstool. His trusty knife, the only thing he owned that he assigned any real value to, stood perpendicular to the ragged wood grain bar, it's well-honed blade an eighth deep into the surface. The thin light inside the bar caught glistening on the blade and the stacked leather ring grip, both lovingly maintained yet weathered almost as much as it's owner.

    thunk

    Another bottle of Bilbringi rum. Ledo sloshed the bottle, pulling the cork free with his teeth, and poured a measure into his dirty glass. It had taken him a bottle to get this far. Another word. A final period. Done. Crag-skinned hands worked the thick stock of paper, creasing each with loving precision into thirds, and pressed each into a pre-marked envelope.

    The Rodian adjacent to him reached for the bottle, and the old pirate clapped a hand over the alien's own, holding the bottle firmly in place.

    "Yer drivin' mate."

    The Rodian blinked, shrugging.

    "If the money's good, old man. Three letters halfway across the galaxy. That's time, old man. That's effort. That's money."

    Ledo downed his rum, turning the glass upside down on the bar as he slapped it back down. He reached into his pocket, and pulled out a pre-authorized chit. The Rodian glanced at it, his antennae perking to signal he was suitably impressed by the payment as he pocketed it.

    "I'll do it. You're crazy though. Who sends letters these days."

    The pirate glanced at his courier, then looked away.

    "People who got summin t' say."

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    It was a rare day on the ocean planet without a torrential downpour, and the sun was out in spirit with unthreatening clouds hung against blue like great, lazy whales. The moment everything turned pleasant, Byl Laprovik was off, running the length of the outer concourse of their small city suspended over the waves. Groups of Humans and Mon Cals gave the runner wide berth as he held to a firm pace. The circuit was 15.4 kilometers, a proper endurance cycle but also short enough to push your limits. As the Alliance agent was closing the final kilometer, he took pains to keep pace and form. The unusual heat of the day had brought out his perspiration, which darkened his shirt down lines both front and back.

    The last 200 meters, Byl abandoned discipline. This was the point to use everything in the tank. To push beyond tired. His vision narrowed to the objective, the sound of footfall and breath and blood all in time with urgent rhythm. At last he reached the point where he began, at the apartment that he shared with James Prent. Not sacrificing an ounce of his stride until he passed the mark, he allowed another fifty meters to bleed his inertia and eventually close to a stop.

    Flush-faced, glistening with sweat, and still breathing heavily, Byl doubled back those last few meters to the front door, his expression changing from dull and grim-faced to suddenly focused. He hadn't imagined it. Walking, but quickening his step, Byl reached the apartment door, but stooped down rather than hitting the control switch. There was something wedged in the threshold. He pulled it away.

    An envelope.

    It was seam side up. Turning it over in his hand, he read the scratchy handwriting on the front.

    James Prent

    Byl frowned, turning the letter over in his hand as he considered the usual paranoid due diligence he was accustomed to. Eventually, however, he simply pressed the button in front of him to open the door.

    "James?"

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    Somewhere along the Tionese frontier

    The war was over. It was the lie they'd all learned to live with. Mortal combat with the Galactic Empire paused for indefinite hiatus while each side stared across a wide gulf, sharpening their apocalyptic knives. The eternal shadow of dread hanging over the known universe. And yet, underneath that shadow, fighting never really ended. There were no shortage of weekend villains. Tinpot one planet warlords cast like poisonous seeds across the fallow fields of the outer rim. Neat and tidy wars settled in days or weeks, that maybe made the second feed cycle on the HoloNet.

    The weekend villains were as real as the Empire. The fighting was real. The blood was still real. Real enough when you could still see and smell it.

    "Is there anything else for your report, Captain Quez?"

    The holographic admirals in his office flickered and shimmered. While they were conveniently desk-sized recreations, he was the one in the room left feeling small. Clearing his throat, Cirrsseeto arranged his notes in front of him.

    "jIt's my assessment that the Vantjiil Rrajiderrs have been effectjiveljy neutrraljized as a pjirracy thrreat on thjis corrrjidorr. Wjith the confjirrmed kjills frrom the local squadrron and ourr own engagements, jI don't beljieve they can effectjively mount rresjistance herre."

    In short, good enough. No closure. It felt so familiar. The holographic admirals seemed pleased by this somehow. Maybe the raiders were snuffed out. Maybe they simply scrambled for relative safe haven in the Tion Cluster. Or maybe they'd be some other Alliance star system's problem next week. Good enough.

    "Thank you, Captain. We are coordinating with ORCOM commands to evaluate our efforts. In the meantime, your orders are to make course for Lantillies and effect repairs and rearmament. Two week furlough for command and crew."

    "Aye, ma'am."

    "Command out."

    And in unison, the holographic admirals conveniently made their exit, leaving Cirrsseeto alone in the void. He turned in his chair, staring out into the empty perpetual night of deep space. Beyond a star to call home. Wearily shuffling his meeting notes aside, he found a datapad beneath it that was next in the queue of matters to attend. Standard formatting. Alliance Navy letterhead.

    From the AFP Novgorod, Cirrsseeto Quez, Captain. Dear [MR/MRS/MS] [NAME], it is with profound regret that I write to you to inform you that [RANK] [NAME] has been killed in the line of duty.

    All neat and tidy. The condolences, extolling of service virtues, and every nuance of verbage already fussed over and settled by lawyers and chaplains. All you really had to do was fill in the blanks. Cirrsseeto's hand started to tremble, and he turned back to his desk to rest the pad on it's cluttered surface.

    Next to the paper letter.

    His hand hovered over each, balling into a fist briefly to steady it as he reached for the paper instead. It's ugly handwriting and unapologetic syntax. The smudge of ink. A stain the Captain couldn't identify. Everything the condolence letter he had to write was not. He wondered how long the damned thing had to plod along on Alliance supply ships to piggyback to his squadron, bouncing from hot spot to hot spot. A ridiculous, inefficient way to reach out to your fellow man, and yet...something in that meant more. More than a form letter. More than a thing he could just stick a name onto, press a button, and send halfway across the galaxy. All the way to Sullust, where a mother might even read it a few seconds later, and have her heart torn out with grief.

    Cirrsseeto knew who sent this letter. And he knew why he did.

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    The Theelin girl kept her face on the pillow and the business end up. Maybe she could tell I wasn't in the mood to get creative. I wasn't even looking at her, just straight ahead at that stupid painting over my headboard, watching the slight movements it made on the wall, marking time of each thrust. It cost two thousand seven hundred credits. A triangle, three squares, and a confetti of paint daubs. I bought it precisely because it cost two thousand seven hundred credits, had a name attached to it, and the colors matched the room.

    These were the kinds of things that concerned me now.

    I released, only now breaking contact with the painting and remembering I wasn't actually alone tonight. The Theelin girl - the only name she'd ever given me was Angel - rolled over on the bed, breathily reciprocating arousal. Faker. I didn't care. I got off the bed, padding naked to the refresher to clean up. I hadn't yet installed a water system. A guy was coming to give an estimate for that next week. Five minutes later, I was done, but didn't quite make it out of the bathroom. The mirror distracted me. Maybe it was the angle I glanced at in passing, but I paused. Not out of vanity this time. I wasn't sure quite what I was looking at. A line on my face that hadn't been there five years ago? Something behind the eyes?

    "Are you coming back?" Angel called from the bedroom. She was used to a three part act. We'd done this little dance before.

    "Yeah."

    I'd broken my attention from the reflection a moment out of reflex to turn to the door. I glanced back, and it was just that. A reflection.

    "I need a drink."

    The bathrobe was cinched around my middle two strides out of the bedroom. It was velvet and tailored. Who was I even trying to impress with a bathrobe in a bathroom with no actual water? I walked past the bedroom, heading to my office.

    "Do you have any champagne?"

    "I'll bring it."

    Angel was two hundred credits an hour. Champagne was just gratuity. One crytal flute. One bottle from the cubby fridge. I set those aside. I wasn't in the champagne mood tonight. A level of scotch from the decanter into a waiting tumbler, sitting next to that damned letter. Distracted again. I set aside the champagne, and fell into my chair. Scotch in one hand, letter in the other.

    "Hey."

    She'd come into the office. I hadn't noticed. Folding the letter up, I killed my scotch, and rose from my seat.

    "Sorry."

    Angel was giving me a look I didn't like. I held the champagne and the glass up.

    "You alright?"

    I stopped dead in my tracks. That wasn't the sort of question I was expecting. Not the kind of question I paid for. I filled her glass.

    "You care?"

    Angel must have realized she'd stepped across a threshold. She wore uncertainty on her face.

    "I don't know. Maybe? I'm here every week, Mr. Prent. You're a little more than another john, y'know."

    A hooker for a confidant. Who else did I have?

    "You got a family?"

    She tensed. Now it was my turn to cross the threshold. We were stuck in this social construct of sympathy, so out of place it almost physically hurt. I cursed under my breath, shaking my head.

    "Fuck it, nevermind. Don't answer that."

    I turned to my floor to ceiling windows. Beyond, the city in the clouds glowed brilliantly in the night sky.

    "You want me to stay?"

    Nothing I could do here was going to fix any of this. Nothing.

    "No."

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    James was sitting on the sofa when Byl came into their apartment. The vidscreen on the wall had some show or another on - she'd turned it on for background noise while she folded laundry, but had tuned out long ago. It was a beautiful day outside and she had the curtains drawn against the view.

    It wasn't that she was agoraphobic, exactly, but she still had a hard time looking out on the endless expanse of blue ocean that made up the planet Dac. Okay, maybe she was agoraphobic. And traumatized. And hiding from ... She took a deep breath, pushing her thoughts away and resisting the urge for a smoke.

    "Have a good run?" James smiled up at Byl, her lap covered in folded shirts. Piles of haphazardly folded clothes rose around her on the couch and coffee table like a synthetic fabric mountain range. "I finally got the laundry done." She grimaced a bit, and tossed a pair of socks onto the growing mound on the floor.

    and if you go, furious angels will bring you back to me

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    "Huh?"

    The sound of rushing blood was still in his ears. Byl parsed her question together a second later, distracted by the letter in his hand.

    "Yeah."

    As an afterthought, he checked his pacekeeper on his wrist, looking at time of completion. He frowned.

    "About a minute slow."

    Again, he turned the letter over in his hand.

    "Must've been distracted by the view. The clouds are..."

    Byl looked at James. She'd kept herself busy around the apartment. Parables about idle hands. Until two minutes ago, he'd planned on running through the refresher and pulling her out into the daylight to act like regular people. A little slip of paper had a profound effect on his frame of mind.

    "I found this wedged in the door."

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    "Advertisement?" she asked, looking up from a flimsy undergarment that she was deciding to just wad up and shove in a drawer. Byl's face made her pause, however, and she held out her hand for the paper, her heart skipping a beat. What was it?

    James turned it over in her hands, a slightly grubby envelope with her name scrawled on the front. The address was out of date by a few months, and it had apparently been hand delivered because door to door mail service was a thing that... well, she couldn't even remember it being a thing, ever. Not on civilized worlds, anyway.

    "Should I open it?" She looked up at Byl with a grimace. "This is kinda weird."

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    The slippery slope would take him to a dark place, starting with burning the letter and picking up in the middle of the night to move halfway across the galaxy. Severing ties, changing names. Running. She could see the question behind his eyes, and the tensing of his body. But in that moment, he relented.

    "It's just a letter."

    Not exactly a downplay. Who sent letters?

    "Do you want me to open it?"

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    Yes, she thought, but she shrugged, acting more flippant than she felt. "Nah, it's just a letter. I guess." James turned it over a few more times, and then found a weak spot in the seal where she could tear the envelope apart.

    After another hesitation she got the letter open, discarding the torn envelope and unfolding the contents.

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    No microfilament bombs. No suspicious powders. No glowing sith runes. No clandestine pitfalls from imagined bogeymen. Just a letter. Would he impose if he sat adjacent and read over her shoulder? Yes. Byl fidgeted where he stood, resolving to trust James to the contents of what she was reading.

    "What is it?"

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    Her mouth had slowly fallen open as she read, and then she turned it around and handed it to Byl.

    James,
    It's been a long wile since I seen your lovly face. I
    know I wasn't what you wished fore, and I wishd I
    was a better dad. I give yer dearst mum a
    necklace once, and I hope she up and give it to
    you when she rest her sole. I wanna see you ware
    it, and see my pritty girl again. Come and see me
    on Tatooween.

    A hug and a kiss,
    Yer ol' man


    She opened and closed her mouth a few times, then managed, "Um. So, that's a thing that jus' happened."

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    He took the letter, eyes still meeting her incredulous expression. As they drifted to the letter's contents, his brows raised at the nuna-scratch handwriting. Papa Prent wasn't exactly a Chandrila Scholar.

    "The last time you met your dad was bloody awkward, wasn't it?"

    James wasn't the first person in the galaxy to have a dysfunctional family life, but Ledo Prent wasn't just a deadbeat. He was a pirate.

    He wasn't sure what else to do with the letter, other than fold it up and hold it in front of him like it was radioactive. He didn't need to ask what she was going to do. She was still processing it.

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    "That's puttin' it mildly," she said. After a moment James surged off the couch, displacing and knocking over a pile of folded pants and leaving a trail of mismatched socks in her wake as she made her way into the bedroom. Byl heard her rummaging around, and then she reemerged, a thin silver chain in her hand.

    She kicked a sock out of the way and walked over, holding it up. "Didn't know this was from him. Got it from social services - it's about the only thing of m'mom's I got. I have," she corrected herself. She'd been working on her accent, determined to stop sounding like some inbred Nar Shadaaian bumpkin. Or like him, she thought, glancing at the letter Byl was still holding. Talking to Ledo had been the catalyst, now that she thought about it.

    A small blue stone in a simple silver setting dangled from the chain. "It's just glass, or near enough it don't - doesn't matter."

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    Byl looked at the keepsake. The silver had been lovingly maintained to ward off tarnish, but the stone was fairly dull. Not even paste, it wasn't so ambitious. A barely glossed patina, cloudy and uneven translucence. At least it was perfectly round, couched in a silver cage at the center. He looked from the jewelry to the girl who'd inherited it. The girl whose patois was regressing. Mussing up clean clothes. Mussing up syntax. A glimpse back a few chapters toward the front of the book. What did Ledo want? Money? They had almost none of that.

    "This is the part where I'd be telling you no, isn't it?"

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    Her mouth twisted, her eyes fixed on the bit of blue dangling from her hand. "You could say it." James looked up at him, her face a mix of emotions. "I'd say you can come with?"

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    He was on a fulcrum. A tipping point between caution and living. Something terrible could happen to James either way, and that was becoming clearer to him. Was he more worried about her dying, or more worried about her not living?

    Byl took the necklace from her hands, working the clasp apart. He wasn't the surest of hands, but a moment of effort had the necklace around her neck. His fingers traced the chain to the front, resting over the blue stone.

    "Okay."

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    She placed her hand over his, her heart thumping against his touch. "It'll be okay," she said. "If he tries anything stupid I'll just kick him in the shins. Could be he's just gettin' nostalgic in his advanced years. Plus, I've always wanted to visit Tatooine."

    "Really?" He kissed her forehead.

    "No," she sighed.

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    flick

    The fly was back. Cirrsseeto had gotten five good minutes to himself. This cantina was a shithole.

    bzzzzz

    He heard it coming a foot before it landed, again tickling the hairs at the tuft of his right ear. Again, catapulted. He'd be back. The asshole was relentless. Bored blue eyes traced his imagined flight path to puckered divots in the mud wall. He'd seen enough blaster shots to know the end result. Maybe some drunkard had been bored to sand madness and tried to wing the very same fly.

    The barkeep eyed Cirrsseeto like a carrion bird. He'd been drying the same glass for two minutes, waiting for him to order a drink. Twenty credits for a glass of water, Nomaani's barbed cock. Like hell! The beer was cheaper by five fold. Eventually he was going to have to capitulate, and the barkeep was just waiting for it. Cirrsseeto was sweating through his cheap shirt. Everything he wore outside of a uniform or a set of filthy coveralls these days made him feel like a tourist. Didn't help that it was a floral print. Maybe the array of deep green leaves and pink flowers would break up the outline of pit stains?

    "Still waiting for your friend?" the barkeep purred, his greasy head glinting sunlight from the open hole in the wall that counted as a window.

    "Yeah."

    Cirr's tail snapped in annoyance. Where was that pirate? You didn't show up late to your own party.

    zzzzz

    Angry blue eyes turned upwards, moving left and right.

    "jI thjink jI'm rready forr that beerr."

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    "Better add a shot of whiskey to that order," James said, hopping up onto the stool next to Cirr. "Oh, an' two more beers."

    The bartender grunted and set to pouring. She looked up at the huge Cizerack and smiled. "Been a while, Cirr." Behind her Byl was lurking somewhere, checking out the place before committing to sitting next to her. If he took too long, she'd already decided she was going to drink his beer.

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    He didn't initially place the voice, and his attention was too busy fussing over his fingernails to get a look as she sat beside him. She sure was talking to him in the familiar though. Pretty fresh, lady - he thought. Five people in a bar at the middle of day in Anchorhead, and she's the only one of 'em trying to have a good time. He was about to politely excuse himself when he heard the voice say his name. Say what?

    Cirr's head turned a quarter turn right, his eyes went big as saucers, and he promptly fell off his barstool in shock, rattling the floorboards, causing the barkeep to drop a glass, and causing the drunk old prospector in the back booth to wake up with a "Wossat?!"

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